SPRING

Flowers start to bloom

Happiness surrounds the world

It is spring again.


I decided to try something new today. So I wrote a haiku! This was so fun to do. I followed the 5-7-5 syllable structure and included a kigo (or a seasonal reference). Let me know how I did and whether any mistakes are there.

I hope spring brings a flood of warmth and happiness to your life!

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  1. I like your haiku. Very pretty. I didn’t know about the kigo. Thanks. There is so much to learn about poetry in general. There are two sights (that I know) will give you feed back. I’m still learning, so there could be more. I will send them in different messages. The app will not let you bounce back and forth between on open reply and the rest of the app. Sorry about this.

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    1. Maya's avatar Maya says:

      It’s totally fine and yes poetry is just so vast and beautiful! Thank you so much for the feedback and tips, I really appreciate it 💖

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